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Change: not to go nuts.Some go only to return To tell of where they've been and the wonders they've seenAnd what they did learn. We get closer with each passing dayTo that place of which we are unawarePerhaps we will meet again thereJust a heartbeat away.
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Change: been --ofand the institution that theywonders werethey've in--seenAnd what they did learn. We get closer with each passing dayTo that place of which we are unawarePerhaps we will meet again thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: been --of the institution that they were in--And what they did learn. We get closer with each passing dayTo that place of which we are unaware I hope thatPerhaps we will meet again thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: been --of the institution that they were in--And what they did learn. We get closer with each passing dayTo that place of which we are unaware WeI hope that we will meet again thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: not to go nuts.Some go and some return To tell of where they've been --of the institution that they were in--And what they did learn. We get closer with each passing dayTo that which we are unawareWe will meet again thereJust a heartbeat away.
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Change: in--And what they did learn. WhetherWe get atcloser workwith oreach atpassing playdayAndTo whetherthat orwhich notwe we'reare awareunawareWe will all eventually findmeet ourselvesagain thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: reason or rhyme Without going nuts.Some go and some return To tell of where they've been --of the institution that they were in--And what they did learn. Whether at work or at playAnd whether or not we're awareWe will all eventually find ourselves thereJust
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Change: To tell of where they've been -- of the institution or cult that they were in--And what they did learn. Whether at work or at playAnd whether or not we're awareWe will all eventually find ourselves thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: To tell of where they've been --the institution or cult that they were in--And what they did learn. Whether at work or at playAnd whether or not we're awareWe will all eventually find ourselves thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: return To tell of where they've been --the institution that they were in--And what they did learn. Whether at work or at play WhetherAnd whether or not we're awareWe will all eventually find ourselves thereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: the institution that they were in--And what they did learn. WithWhether eachat passingwork dayor playWe drawWhether closeror tonot the chasm--we're awaretheWe will all find life-endingourselves spasmthereJust a heartbeat away.Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: that seenthey were in--And what they did learn. What itWith is thateach theypassing sayday IsWe thatdraw wordscloser canto notthe expresschasm-- The understanding that awaitsthe uslife-ending spasmJust a heartbeat away. Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: seemseem. There are no shortcuts. Getting there takes a lifetime of searching for the reason/rhyme Without going nuts. Some go only to return To tell of where they've been And the wonders they've seen And what they did learn. What it is that they say Is that
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Change: Getting there takes a lifetime of searching for the reason/rhyme Without selflessgoing giving.nuts.Some go only to return To tell of where they’vethey've been And the wonders they’vethey've seen And what they did learn. What it is that they say Is that words can not express
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Change: climb Suchtravel littlethe distancedistance, Even with persistencepersistence, Requires a lifetime A lifetimeOf of living In such a fashion As to practice compassion And selfless giving giving.Some go only to return AndTo tell of where they’ve been And the wonders they’ve seen And
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Change: giving Some go only to return And tell of where they’ve been And the wonders they’ve seen And what they did learn What it is that they say Is that words can not express The joy that awaits us Just a heartbeat away. Jerry StatonCopyright ©2007 Jerry Staton
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Change: There were only format changes (bold, italics, etc.) in this version. See this version for details.
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Change: A heartbeat away Doesn’t sound so far I could get there by car If one hit me today To climb Such little distance Even with
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